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Laeran Tritik


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Join date : 2013-02-12

PostSubject: Laeran Tritik   Tue Feb 12, 2013 8:54 am

Last Name : Tritik
First name : Laeran
Nickname : Lae

Race: Efreet

Age: 596

Sex of your character: Male

Sexual orientation of your character: Straight

Profession: Traveling Mercenary

Kingdom: The Inferno

Powers: Efreet form

Description of your powers:
Efreet form isn't really a power, but Laeran insists that it is. He basically lights himself on fire in this form, burning anything he touches. He doesn't come into this form unless he really needs to, or when he's angry. It drains a lot of his energy, unfortunately. It takes a while before he can come out of this form.
Blaze is when Laeran manipulates fire. He rarely uses it if he's not in a fight. He most commonly uses his skill to create a blast of fire, burning anything within ten meters. Sometimes he can't control his ability, but he's trying to master it. As a result, he began using it a lot more.

Physical: Laeran has semi-wild, dark hair. His eyes change color depending on his mood. Laeran is pretty tall and skinny. He's in good shape, but he's very pale. His skin is usually very cold, despite being an Efreet. He wears a white, sleeveless coat and long, black pants. The pants have a design on the lower outsides that supposed to represent wings. He also wears black boots that lace up to his calves.

Psycho: Laeran is very calm most of the time. He doesn't like to have fun unless he's around people he trusts. He has anger issues, too, which is usually the cause of going in Efreet Form. He's passionate and kind, and very loyal. He's stubborn, but he's willing to compromise every now and then. And, he's never loved anyone before.

Story: Laeran grew up in the Inferno with his three brothers, Laeran being the second-youngest. His two older brothers used to Laeran his parents left them, with no protection and no shelter. Laeran was always distant from his brothers. While they played and danced, Laeran preferred to sit by himself, so he grew alone. One day, a mercenary came through the area he lived. "You'd be a a great mercenary one day," the man said, so Laeran became a mercenary. He forever worked alone, traveling the deepest cave and the highest mountain. He still does. Forever alone.
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PostSubject: Re: Laeran Tritik   Tue Feb 12, 2013 8:50 pm

hmmm all right! so... here are things that you need to do:

1. add more lines to psychological description and story
2. effreet form is not a power.. you are an effreet and you already have that!! XDDD so.. if you wish to add another power then, feel free to do so ^_^

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